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- Lost in your eyes
- I'm forgetting my name,
- I stutter some words
- And you laugh just the same,
- I take a deep breath,
- I speak once more,
- I finally say in words
- These feelings I can't control,
- I wait for your answer,
- But you don't reply.
- You then look at me and say,
- You are so cute when you're shy!
Can someone please tell me what category i should put this in, because i am so not sure! D:
D’awww I found and edited this poem I wrote in 2009, the original went like this:
Lost in your eyes
Forgetting my name
I stutter some words
You laugh all the same
I take a deep breath
I speak once more
I finally say in words
These feelings i can’t control
I wait for your answer
I hear no reply
You look at me and say,
You are so cute when your shy~
D’awww I found and edited this poem I wrote in 2009, the original went like this:
Lost in your eyes
Forgetting my name
I stutter some words
You laugh all the same
I take a deep breath
I speak once more
I finally say in words
These feelings i can’t control
I wait for your answer
I hear no reply
You look at me and say,
You are so cute when your shy~
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This reminds me of Donnie and April. I can Imagine Donnie writing this. Anybody else?